I INTRODUCTION
A.HOOK/ATTENTION
GETTER
Do you like eating fast food?Yes,most of the people
especially for young generation in this world prefer fast food because of many
reasons.
B.GENERAL STATEMENT
Fast food has become popular among people and studies have shown that McDonald’s was the most valuable fast food
brand in the world with an estimated brand value of about 81.16 billion U.S.
dollars.
C.THESIS STATEMENT
Briefly,as the
fast food offers a reasonable price and save our time,it has also contribute to
unhealthy diet for human population.
II BODY
A.Topic Sentence
The significant reasons fast food become popular from day to
day are they are inexpensive and easy available.
1.Supporting Point 1
When people all over the world are looking for a quick,save
their time and easy meal to grab on the go,fast food is the best solution.
Besides,fast
food restaurants are so popular nowadays and we can find them almost everywhere
without searching for a long time especially for people who are busy with their
work.
b.sub-supporting
point 2 (specific detail-3rd level)
On
the other hand,students do not have much time between classes and the
common solution for them is eating fast food such as toasts and hamburgers in a
place which is near to their school.
2.Supporting Point 2
The majority of fast food restaurants
provides customer with reasonable price because the cost of ingredients to serve fast food is low.
a.Sub-supporting Point 1 (specific detail-3rd
level)
In a survey conducted by B.Tuttle(2014),fast
food restaurant provide the food in a bigger portion for very little money so,
absolutely most people can afford it.
i. Sub-sub-supporting point (specific detail-4th
level)
Some of fast food restaurants offer at low price because they have high competition in their business
among other restaurants such as the famous francaises of Pizza Hut and Domino’s
Pizza.
B. Transitition Paragraph
1.Summary/conclusion
In short,fast food had become
a common food for all people especially among children and teens around the world due to its low price and
fast producing meals.
2.Transitition sentence
Briefly,as the fast food
offers a reasonable price and save time,it has contribute to unhealthy diet for human population.
C.Topic Sentence 2
However, this change in lifestyle can lead to some serious effects
and will suffer from an unhealthy diet.
1.Supporting point 1
As we know,fast food do not contain enough nutrients that are needed for
our body to stay healty such as vitamins,proteins and calcium.
a.sub-supporting point
As a result,you may feel
chronically fatigued and lack of energy to complete daily tasks and jobs.C.Chandrima(2014)
states that a set of McDonald’s meals have a high level of salt and sugar which
are not good for our body system if taken daily.
2.Supporting point 2
Other than that,,unhealthy
processed food are a potential health threat since they contribute to the
obesity and chronic diseases among people.
a.sub-supporting point 2
According to P. Ann and C.Elea(2015) ,obesity can lead to health problems
as varies as diabetes,high blood pressure and heart attack so,it is no wonder
that these kind of food have attracted to health problems.
III CONCLUSION
A.
Restatement of thesis statement
To conclude the overall of this
topic,affordable and fast meals provided are the major reasons on why people
prefer fast food even though it has a bad impact to our body like providing us
with unbalanced diet.
B.Suggestion/recommendation
There is not a big
problem if we consume a right quantity of fast food and not eat regularly.Setting short-term and long-term goals for young generations is a great source as motivation to reduce
fast food consumption.
REFERENCES:
1)
C.Chandrima(Ed)(2014).10 Reasons why you
shouldnot eat food at McDonalds.Retrieved November 4,2015,from http://listovative.com
2)
Ann Pietrangelo and Elea Carey(2015), the
Effects of
fast food on
the Body,retrieved from; http://www.healthline.com/health/fast-food-effects-on-
body (11 Nov 2015)
3)
Brad Tuttle,2014,Fast Food Chains Are Desperate
to Kill the Dollar Menu,retrieved from; http://business.time.com/2014/01/14/fast-food-chains-are-desperate-to-kill-the-dollar-menu/
(11 Nov 2015)
4)
No Author,The Statistics portal,retrieved from; http://www.statista.com/statistics/273057/value-of-the-most-valuable-fast-food-brands-worldwide/(11
Nov 2015)
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