Questions: Why swimming subject should be not compulsory
for university students to graduate?
Thesis statement: Swimming
subject should be not compulsory for university students to graduate because of
swimming can lead to health problems, swimming can cause drowning and swimming
demands high energy.
1)
Point 1: Firstly, swimming can lead to health
problems.
a) Sub
fact 1: According to Brian (2015), the water of the pool is mostly chlorinated
and it can be absorbed by your skin and lungs while breathing.
b) Sub
fact 2: It can cause skin allergy or respiratory problems like asthma.
2)
Point 2: Besides, swimming is dangerous because
it can cause drowning.
a) Sub
fact 1: Open swimming like at the sea, lake or river can increase the chances
of drowning because water currents are not stable like in the pool.
b) Sub
fact 2: Aquatic animals, like jellyfish, sharks and crabs are other threats as
they can harm you physically.
3)
Point3: Lastly, swimming demand high energy.
a) Sub
fact 1: As a student, you will feel exhausted because you have lost your energy
while swimming.
b) Sub
fact 2: As a result, you become weak and cannot concentrate during classes of
the other subjects.
